lets improve our chinese! =D
i mean, it MAY very well be our last year taking chinese as a subject alr. so yupps ...
let's take chinese more seriously =)
okayy.. this is random cos i suddenly 心血来潮 and want to post something.
and since writing/typing/whatever things down can make me remember them better (and since not many ppl will come to this blog) why not eh?
those who actually read can gain knowledge too =) [a bit gl but zzzzzzzzzz......]
potential compo topic(报章) :
报章报道: 一位八十多岁的老婆婆长期热心帮助独居病弱的老人而获得表扬。fyi, it isn't as easy as it seems.
i'm guessing that the keywords are 八十多岁的老婆婆 and 长期热心帮助 and 获得表扬.
now it seems like the whole sentence is a keyword itself. keysentence -.- ok, nvm.
开头: 抄题+直述感想抄题--报章报道: 一位八十多岁的老婆婆长期热心帮助独居病弱的老人而获得表扬。
感想--读了这则新闻后，在惊讶之余我对这位老婆婆的行为感到十分敬佩。她在八十岁的高龄时还能有此行为，的确应该受到表扬。
中腰部分
1) 个人理由
2)分析原因 --- for this 报章, 原因should be 行善意义
3)提出建议
中腰:
1) 为何有以上感想? --个人理由
(A) 老婆婆本身已八十多岁，而还能造福人群，行善---给其他年龄还笑得国人树立好榜样， 尤其是年轻一代。至于年长一辈，也让他们受到
鼓舞 [点题(80 多岁/年长者)]-- 行善不论年龄，年纪大的人士不一定要扮演受别人帮助的角色，也可以反过来帮助他人
(B)为何应该获得表扬?--宣扬/散播爱心，树立典范。2)行善的意义:
(A) 社会上仍有一群不幸人士等我们伸出援手。 (不管多么富有/发达的国家，都会有人生活在贫困的环境下，有种种原因得不到亲友的帮助，需要我们上前帮助。)
(B) 行善不在于获得表扬，在于给他人温情，自己的人生更有价值。真正具有善心，乐于奉献， 而不是自私自利，只为自己着想。
3)建议: 进一步培养人们的善心
(A) 政府: 宣传活动/鼓励社会团体主办慈善活动
(B)传媒的力量: 报章/杂志/电视艺人带头 。。。
(C)学校:带学生参观孤儿院/老人院/做慈善活动/定期做义工
(D)家庭: 家长以身作则，支持并参加慈善活动(产生耳濡目染的效果)
(E)个人:明白幸福不是必然，多为他人付出的意义。
结尾: 终结全文+寄托希望
总而言之，一位高龄老人仍去帮助别人这一行为表明了社会中还有一群善心人士在默默奉献。我希望有关方面能采用以上提出的方法，
多方努力*，在不久的将来，使我国成为一个人人彼此关心，互相帮忙得温情社会。
*it's 多方努力 here and not 多管其下 because 多管其下通常 is to 解决问题
no sample compo cos the one i wrote was
!@!$##@$!
totally cannot make it one. ):
those up there are my
notes. i didn't write those myself. (like obviously)
only re-writing(typing in this case) to make a more profound impression of this baozhang in my brain.
let's hope it works XD
(how come i can't write like this in exams?!!!! T.T)
if anyone or perhaps 郑老师 happens to see this, give comments on how to improve kaesss??
like, i can't think of any other 行善的意义 or 建议 =/
or maybe some other things which i didn't add in...
lol
